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"Velocity Weapon" by Megan O'Keefe - How do to AI right

In this post, I’d like to spotlight Velocity Weapon by Megan E. O’Keefe, a novel where the AI depiction is particularly insightful.

Just to be clear, this is not a review, but more a look into the use of AI in the story. Also, I’m not interested in criticizing authors for their choices on how to depict AI. If I like something, I’ll point it out. If I don’t, I’ll remain silent. The only exception to this rule is big-budget movies. Because (i) when you have a crew of hundreds that include tech consultants, we have a right to point out whatever flaws we like; and (ii) frankly nothing I say will have an impact on their bottom line or success, so no reason to hold back.

Back to Velocity Weapon. I said this isn’t a review, but I’ll point out that I enjoyed the characters and the plot. The main character is Sanda Greeve, a no-nonsense soldier who is thoughtful, competent, and plucky. Not to mention, she talks her way in and out of trouble while making some difficult choices along the way. Hmm, that character does ring a bell, no wonder I liked her. 🙂

Now, let’s get into the two aspects of AI depiction that made me say: this is cool!

The first is that the two societies in this solar system have made different design choices for AI: they both have AI systems, but one allows their AIs to have personality while the other doesn’t. This was a great set up because AIs are both matter-of-factly present and somewhat novel (when AIs and people from different societies interact). O’Keefe does a great job showing that your expectation of what an AI is (or should be) shapes the interactions AND the outcomes. What’s more, Sanda’s views of AI change over time, both in positive and negative ways, raising concerns about trust, motivation, and deception. These are key AI research topics today, so O’Keefe really hits the mark on injecting contemporary AI concerns into Velocity Weapon.

The second cool aspect of Velocity Weapon is that Bero—the AI who is one of the main characters—has skeletons in its closet to the point of showing symptoms of PTSD. (I won’t say more to avoid spoilers.) This is where the AI characterization becomes intriguing: O’Keefe lets Bero use its powers cleverly to handle the situation in a way a human could not have concocted or managed. It would have been easy to “humanize” Bero and have it act the way we’d expect a human to act. But Bero has strengths and weaknesses that make it distinctly different but is still recognizably suffering. That is a hard balance to strike and O’Keefe does it perfectly.

If you’re looking for an interesting AI depiction in novels, I definitely recommend Velocity Weapon.

Severed Roots
Book 3
Severed Roots
The conclusion to the saga that began with Purged Souls, Foreword INDIES Book of the Year Finalist

Former head of Special Forces Lori Rose’s sudden reappearance after a year-long exile threatens the fragile peace Governor Amy Chipps has negotiated with her powerful neighbors. As hostilities intensify, the discovery of an ominous device buried in the unregulated territories shatters the balance of power, sending Amy on the run.

With increasingly powerful quakes foreboding disaster and three armies jostling for control, Amy must reclaim power while Lori must wrest the doomsday device from their enemies. But can they put aside their differences and work together before cataclysmic forces destroy the West Coast?

Forged Wings
Prequel Novella
Forged Wings
A Lori Rose Novella set in the Uregs

A decade after a global virus and the subsequent chaos brought civilization to the brink, Lori Rose joined the military of a nascent matriarchal society to strengthen the rebuilding efforts. But her career stalled because her headstrong personality drew the ire of her superiors. Now, as she contemplates her dwindling options, their enemy launches a sneak attack that kills her command staff and captures hundreds.

But if their enemy wanted a quick victory, they crossed the wrong soldier. With nothing but her wits and a few unlikely allies, Lori hatches a daring rescue attempt against a technologically and numerically superior force.

Can she save her people before her actions plunge them into an unwinnable war?

Forged Wings is a prequel novella that introduces Lt. Lori Rose, before she became the feared General.

Purged Souls
Book 1
Purged Souls
A Foreword INDIES Book of the Year Finalist.

Lori wants to restore order to a world ravaged by virus, violence, and declining birthrates. But the rage that fueled her rise from hungry teenager to Special Forces colonel has left her with few allies. When a mortally-wounded soldier disappears from the hospital amid a cover up, Lori reaches beyond official channels to her only remaining friend, Mika.

Orphaned at eight, Mika lives across a fortified border, away from the spotlight. But he could never say no to Lori, so he gets dragged into a world of secrets and deceit. Together, they uncover a conspiracy that assassinated two heads of state to start a war, all to hide the true nature of the virus that nearly destroyed the human race.

With time running out, Lori has to disobey direct orders and embrace new allegiances to stop the impending coup. The problem is, the rage that powers her also distorts her moral compass—which hasn’t been reliable in the best of times.

Carved Genes
Book 2
Carved Genes
The sequel to the Foreword INDIES Book of the Year Finalist Purged Souls

Mika has a new, near-indestructible body—a side effect of the Purge virus. Yet he broods in obscurity, pushing away everyone, including Amy, the one person who can lift his spirits. But when the Purge starts killing again, twenty years after it vanished, he accepts an open-ended mission and disappears.

Thrust into power amid chaos, Amy struggles to rebuild a world ripped apart by the tension between those who carry the Purge and those who don’t. When a general exploits that rift to grab power, Amy makes a bold decision that antagonizes the leaders of two states.

As victims with Purge symptoms multiply, Mika returns with frightening news about the virus’ variants and origins.  With time running out, Amy must unite the bickering factions to stop the new outbreak from destroying their fragile society. But can she trust Mika again?

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